Peer Response Questions

Use these questions as a basis for your discussion. Answer the questions on this form for the writer. Then explain your perceptions and point out specific examples in the draft so the writer will be able to understand and use your comments.

               Criteria                                                                                      No          Somewhat          Yes

1. Is the purpose clear?                                                                              ____          ____              ____

2. Is the thesis clear and strong?                                                                  ____          ____              ____

 

What is the thesis? ___________________________________________________________________________________

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3. Is the topic narrow enough and focused?                                                  ____          ____              ____

4. Does it meet the requirements of the assignment?                                      ____          ____              ____

5. Is there plenty of significant detail (evidence)?                                           ____          ____              ____

  1. Does the writer analyze thoroughly (explaining ideas,

    2. examining the details, discovering connections,
    exploring the subtleties and complexities)?                                          ____          ____              ____

  2. Has the writer integrated quotes, paraphrases,
    summaries, and information from texts, films,
    lectures into the discussion clearly and naturally?                                  ____          ____              ____

8. Has the writer cited his/her sources accurately?                                          ____          ____              ____

9. Is the wording direct, clear, and strong?                                                      ____          ____              ____

10. Is the organization effective?                                                                      ____          ____              ____

11. Is there clear awareness of the audience?                                                  ____           ____              ____

12. Is the sentence structure accurate?                                                             ____          ____              ____

13. Is the editing thorough and effective?                                                          ____          ____              ____

What one editing area most needs attention?

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From Rosemary Adang
         Writing Instructor, HCC