Seminar #4 Jane Tully
Speech -- This preparation is due on the day of the seminar; All 7
questions below must be addressed.
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The purpose of this seminar is for us to discuss a speech
given by Jane Tully, a speechwriter and the president of Tully Communications in
New York City. Read the speech carefully and respond to the following
questions. You will notice numbers alongside the paragraphs. Please use the
numbers to refer to the parts of the speech as you prepare.
- Does Tully use opening acknowledgements before she
begins her speech? Which paragraph(s)?
- What attention getting device does the speaker use?
Was it engaging? Why?
Why not? Which paragraphs
make up the introduction?
- What is the extended metaphor she used throughout the
speech?
- Make a list of 5-7 examples Tully uses in the speech.
What are they (e.g., illustrations, definitions, testimony—personal/other.
Does she use statistics? Does it matter? Explain your response.
- What was the most interesting part of the speech? Why
- You will notice that Tully does not cite sources the
way we have been practicing in class. Is this OK? Why? Why not?
(Remember to consider her audience.)
- Overall, how would you rate this speech? Excellent,
Very Good, Good, Fair, Poor? Explain why you gave it the rating you
did.